Taking the Mafia to the Magic World

This novel had a lot of promise but failed to meet expectations. Except for the MC everyone around him suffers. Too much sh*t piled upon the mcs organization. Tragedy is this novels main concept. The power concept is horrendous. The cms personality is 0. And overall progress of plots is completely random plus extremely slow. Really disappointed with this

Good concept for a story but fails to deliver in bringing it to life. To tooo many forced plots and slow progression. It does stick to the whole tragedy theme thingy.

One of the worst novels I've read on this page. It's a cool idea, but that's it, that's the only thing about this novel that is good, the idea. MC is supposedly a transmigrator with experience in the mafia, but he is just immature and has very bad decision making most of the time. The author uses the badly explained power system for the sake/convenience of the plot. Things aren't properly explained most of the time. It's just very bad. If you have a functioning brain, I don't see how you can enjoy reading this sh*t.

The work in question presents an initially intriguing premise: a protagonist who, after reincarnating, decides to form a mafia. However, throughout the narrative, this promise quickly dissipates due to several fundamental flaws that compromise the cohesion and development of the plot. Firstly, the protagonist is described as someone with the mindset of a 30-year-old man, but his actions and decisions often reflect a disconcerting immaturity. Instead of acting in a strategic and mature manner to achieve his goals, he behaves childishly and impulsively, completely contradicting his supposed mental age. Furthermore, there is a lack of clarity regarding the protagonist's goals. He starts with the idea of building a mafia, but this ambition is not convincingly developed. The lack of a clear purpose makes his actions seem arbitrary and disjointed, making it difficult for the reader to engage with his journey. Another disappointing point is the protagonist's inability to strengthen himself

Very good novel thats quite a fun read with interesting storyline/progression. Mini kingdom building (Mafia family building) aspects that go pretty well and interesting powers.

While the book is undeniably entertaining and fun to read, one aspect falls short of expectations. Despite the promise of a harem subplot, it feels underdeveloped and lacks the depth and impact one would hope for. The potential for exploration and complexity within this aspect of the story remains largely untapped. However, this minor flaw does little to detract from the overall enjoyment of the book. With its engaging plot, well-crafted characters, and imaginative world-building, the story is sure to delight fans of fantasy and adventure alike.

This novel is materpeice which show politics and fantasy at the same time it gives GOT wives and the power structure is a bit hassened but overall a solid 4. 7

At first, the book was intriguing, with a compelling storyline and strong adversaries. However, as the plot progressed, the repetitive cycle of the protagonist constantly facing new enemies became tiresome. What initially captivated me eventually became a tedious pattern, diminishing the overall enjoyment of the story. Ultimately, while the book had its moments, it ultimately fell short of being exceptional, settling instead for a mediocre narrative.

Read 200 chapters and I rated it as mid. It's fine but didn't tickled my fancy hard enough. The world is flat and somewhat generic, the characters are 1 dimensional and I don't connect to them, and it is not tragic enough for my taste. There was this ever present feeling of lacking something. That all you could say is "Eh~".

Hope that helps: to me it looks like the MC is constantly forced into a corner, mainly because of his own (careless, stupid) actions and female plot devices and then of course escalating chain 'villains'. There is literally no break from that repetition other than time skips and a profession side arc. The author appears to be mainly concerned about thrusting an ever more ridiculous amount of females into the plotline. I'm unable to see any character dev here other the MC becoming more powerful and a horned up simp throwing all caution into the wind, with the ultimate goal of creating a harem, not acting like or developing into a smart mafia Don. Honestly, the first chapters were atrocious, but after chapter 30 or so the writing gets a lot better. The MO of the author really never changes, although it and the story dev becomes much more refined. It looks a bit like the author is learning on the job. If that's not your thing I don't recommend, if you don't mind, then give it a try. This is just my personal perspective after all.