Supreme Magus (Web Novel)

sorry, whos raldarak? other than that, the development seems very uninteresting

He doesn't seem uninteresting; he is uninteresting. There are too many chapters for little development as there has been since his promotion to Archmage. But leaving that aside, Raldarak is Lith's second child he conceived until recently. As far as I know, Kamila should be in her third month of pregnancy. I'm waiting for the baby to be born because the story is going to diverge dramatically when he's born.

No i wasent upset about how someone ended up or something i accually really liked reading the first 1.5k chapters ish and it would have honestly been one of my favourite books if it ended around there wich is why i commented, it just makes me upset how that orgional good story hase been in my opinion been dragged trough the mud / actively just being ruined for almoste 2k chapters now just am sad to see it happen you know? Thats my opinion atleast

I can empathize with you because I feel the same way. I understand the author's decisions, but I do not agree with them. In my particular case it's the current impasse in the relationship between Lith and Solus and how he extended the relationship with Kamila. The romance between the two would be beautiful if there wasn't an expiration date and a girl as amazing as Solus at his neck. What exactly disappoints you within these 2,000 chapters?

Its hard to properly put into words but it just dusent feel like a novel that was origionally indended to be this long, since you said its only halfway ish means that he will most likely be stuck at the same core for thousands of chapters wich he hase already been stuck at for more then a thousand, if L20 wanted to make this as long as is he should have either slowed down his progress or made a lote more cores or whatever (idk how to properly write u prob get what i mean) it also feels like the same mental hurdels keep coming back just a constant loop of overcoming 1 thing and then suddenly being 3 steps back for no apperent reason personally im not the biggest fan of the whole mecha sh*t but thats just my opinion, tldr it just dusent feel like a novel ever mesnt to get this long it feels like the final arc of 200 chps (random number) is being strechted to over THOUSANDS

And you have every reason to be upset. The author wrote what amounts to three years, 1095 days in more than 2,600 chapters! This period covers his life in waking society after his promotion to archmage, and yet so much could have been cut that I'm grateful I didn't open my wallet. However, more recently it has been revealed that there is a level above the white core, so I assume some of your concerns can be alleviated. Golems and artifacts have always been a part of the story, and honestly, there's more weird stuff in this novel than mechas. Is the plot ridiculously long beyond necessity? Yes. Could you be more objective? Double yes, but L20 wants to justify what he will do in the second part of the story. At least until chapter 4k Derek's soul should be staying in his new body. In the body of his son, Raldarak. Take some time for yourself and ask me again whenever you want to know more news.

SS reference about the power system unless I'm mistaken

I was surprised by his reaction towards Solus. In a way, the way he expressed himself was quite interesting. I was probably more open to its existence because I had experiences with books and series with two protagonists. This demonstrates how different a reader’s experience can be based on what they have consumed previously.

Worldbuilding works this way. A series of details that are useless to our reality, but that make what we are reading more real. Although I really have to agree with you that a lot of what is written here could be shortened or cut. It pains me to say that the 4k chapters are only part of the first half of the story.

did he reach the white core or does he have any idea on how to reach it and how ckose is he, He is been at light purple stage for like 1000 chapters

he's still purple, there hasn't been any major plot points that would lead him towards white as of right now... i guess other than the fact that he's a candidate to be a guardian BUT this plot point isn't really progressing, this one seems to be curve ball style that has yet to be launched